Riccardo GUIDA
2018-07-12 14:45:51 UTC
Mainly for Ralf ...
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https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L154
REPLACE:
\spadgraph{draw(sin(tan(x)) - tan(sin(x)),x = 10..16)}
BY:
\spadgraph{draw(sin(tan(x)) - tan(sin(x)),x = 10..16,title=="A title here")}
MOTIVATION:
A title was announced the line before.
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https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L222
REPLACE:
\psXtc{
The title may be an arbitrary string and is an
optional argument to the \spadfun{draw} command.
}{
\spadgraph{draw(curve(cos(t), sin(t)), t = 0..2*\%pi)}
}{
BY:
\psXtc{
Note that \Language{} provides a default title based on
the first function specified in \spadfun{curve}.
The title may be an arbitrary string and is an
optional argument to the \spadfun{draw} command.
}{
\spadgraph{draw(curve(cos(t), sin(t)), t = 0..2*\%pi, title=="A title here" )}
}{
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L263
DELETE:
Also note that \Language{} provides a default title based on
the first function specified in \spadfun{curve}.
MOTIVATION:
Sentence anticipated where it is relevant.
A title was announced the line before the first patch.
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https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L276
MOTIVATION:
In 276 -- 293 \spad{p(x,y)} is used instead of a mathematical polynomial p(x,y).
I would eliminate \spad and use the command appropriate for maths.
In 296--310, The mathematical notation p(x,y) of a polynomial expression
is misleading in a command reference, and leads to think to a function p is needed.
I suggest to replace p(x,y) by p, and explain that it is an expression
of type Polynomial with variables x,y.
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https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L392
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L406
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L445
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L458
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L468
TODO:
Patch draw to show units when unit=... is given
MOTIVATION:
unit=-=... is used but nothing is shown in the image.
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https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L400
REPLACE:
Option {\tt clip} with a range sets point clipping of a graph within the
BY:
Option {\tt clip} with a range shows only points within the
MOTIVATION: 'to set point clipping' seems quite technical, plain words are
better.
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https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/algebra/view2D.spad#L10
REPLACE:
++ Description: TwoDimensionalGraph creates virtual two dimensional graphs
BY:
++ Description: GraphImage creates virtual two dimensional graphs
MOTIVATION:
IIUC TwoDimensionalGraph does not exist (old name of GraphImage?)
https://github.com/search?q=TwoDimensionalGraph+repo%3Africas%2Ffricas+extension%3Aspad&type=Code&ref=advsearch
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https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L154
REPLACE:
\spadgraph{draw(sin(tan(x)) - tan(sin(x)),x = 10..16)}
BY:
\spadgraph{draw(sin(tan(x)) - tan(sin(x)),x = 10..16,title=="A title here")}
MOTIVATION:
A title was announced the line before.
---------------------------------------
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L222
REPLACE:
\psXtc{
The title may be an arbitrary string and is an
optional argument to the \spadfun{draw} command.
}{
\spadgraph{draw(curve(cos(t), sin(t)), t = 0..2*\%pi)}
}{
BY:
\psXtc{
Note that \Language{} provides a default title based on
the first function specified in \spadfun{curve}.
The title may be an arbitrary string and is an
optional argument to the \spadfun{draw} command.
}{
\spadgraph{draw(curve(cos(t), sin(t)), t = 0..2*\%pi, title=="A title here" )}
}{
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L263
DELETE:
Also note that \Language{} provides a default title based on
the first function specified in \spadfun{curve}.
MOTIVATION:
Sentence anticipated where it is relevant.
A title was announced the line before the first patch.
----------------------------
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L276
MOTIVATION:
In 276 -- 293 \spad{p(x,y)} is used instead of a mathematical polynomial p(x,y).
I would eliminate \spad and use the command appropriate for maths.
In 296--310, The mathematical notation p(x,y) of a polynomial expression
is misleading in a command reference, and leads to think to a function p is needed.
I suggest to replace p(x,y) by p, and explain that it is an expression
of type Polynomial with variables x,y.
----------------------------
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L392
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L406
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L445
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L458
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L468
TODO:
Patch draw to show units when unit=... is given
MOTIVATION:
unit=-=... is used but nothing is shown in the image.
---------------------------------------
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/doc/htex/ug07.htex#L400
REPLACE:
Option {\tt clip} with a range sets point clipping of a graph within the
BY:
Option {\tt clip} with a range shows only points within the
MOTIVATION: 'to set point clipping' seems quite technical, plain words are
better.
---------------------------------------
https://github.com/fricas/fricas/blob/master/src/algebra/view2D.spad#L10
REPLACE:
++ Description: TwoDimensionalGraph creates virtual two dimensional graphs
BY:
++ Description: GraphImage creates virtual two dimensional graphs
MOTIVATION:
IIUC TwoDimensionalGraph does not exist (old name of GraphImage?)
https://github.com/search?q=TwoDimensionalGraph+repo%3Africas%2Ffricas+extension%3Aspad&type=Code&ref=advsearch
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